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Twisting then her auburn hair,
Furled around a finger taut,
She tugs and twirls so aimlessly,
Grasping hard to calm a thought.
Nervously she nudges so,
A pretty girl who's in distress;
A boy she likes ignoring her,
Niggling, it means no rest.
Fussy in her stressing fume,
She lurches out with no design;
She can't begin to quell her state,
Nor hide the wails that roar inside.

© AWakenFoRsaken
#PrettyGirlProblems

Lol I don't know where this came from really. Never quite had this problem, but I was a bit of an ugly duckling.

AWakenFoRsaken
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OUTCASTxEMPIRES Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Have you been in this sunario?
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AWakenFoRsaken Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
No but I rarely write from experience
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OUTCASTxEMPIRES Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hhmm.....but your a pretty girl. C:
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Evry1wantsu Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Simple, yes, but describes a swath of emotions awash inside the Pretty Girl's mind.
I enjoyed this and the imagery it creates.
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OUTCASTxEMPIRES Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting. :la:
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AWakenFoRsaken Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Conceptually simple but I think the wording is nice.
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